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AU/AU. A little bit of childhood nostalgia featuring our Jack and Ennis...

Warnings - none
Length - 1,800 words
Thanks - to [livejournal.com profile] hesamathgeek for the beta :)

Note - I actually started two other stories for this challenge, but this is the one that appeared randomly. It popped out after playing around on Youtube and watching the intro to kids' TV show Huckleberry Finn.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Q7GGYLmWDU&playnext_from=TL&videos=D0t3RcyZ2NI

Think of Jack and Ennis as Tom Sawyer and Huck Finn respectively, with a bit of Anne of Green Gables thrown in for good measure!



****

Of all the people in the world it had to be him. Such was my bad luck.

I’d never known anyone to have more bad luck than me. I mean, it wasn’t my fault that the boat I had borrowed to go fishing in had sprung a leak. It also wasn’t my fault that the damn thing had sunk in the middle of the river, leaving me battling deep water and heavy cotton clothes which threatened to drag me down. It was also not my fault that I had no dad, or older brothers to teach me to swim. Yeah, I had been dealt a bad hand, sure enough.

So, as I watched the useless lump of wood sink under rippling water, I flailed around a like an uncoordinated puppy and managed to splash my way to the old bridge straddling the middle of the river. Grabbing onto a hefty post, I hauled myself out of the water and clung on like a wet limpet while I contemplated my next move. Wondering how long my arms would hold out.

Barely five minutes had passed before I heard the unmistakable splash of an oar cutting through the water. Thank god for that. I exhaled in relief and rested my forehead against the knotted wood. It wasn’t until I turned towards my potential rescuer to wave for attention, that I realized who it was. On a raft of all things.

Ennis.

I turned back to the post and shifted a little, trying to look like hanging off a post from under a bridge was something I did all the time.

I heard the creak of wood and turned to see Ennis smirking up at me. Brown eyes taunting from underneath that stupid straw hat he always wore.

“Jack Twist. What the hell are you doing?”

I sighed and rolled my eyes, as if I couldn’t believe he had asked such a ridiculous question. “What does it look like I’m doing? I’m fishing. For lake trout.”

“For lake trout.” Ennis repeated, clearly not believing a word I said. He steadied the raft with one hand and held out the other one to me.

I had no choice but to accept his offer of help. It was either that or risk falling back into the river and being mown down by a passing steamboat. Despite my feelings for the guy there was really no contest. I grasped his arm reluctantly and tumbled onto Ennis’ raft, causing it to rock precariously.

“Whoa.” Ennis grabbed the sides and tried to steady it as I scrambled to sit on the opposite end to balance it out.

“Sorry,” I mumbled.

Ennis eyed me carefully and slowly began to paddle. I felt a bit awkward just sitting there, but there wasn’t much else I could do. There was only one oar. And it wasn’t like I really wanted to have a conversation with him.

Ennis was almost a year older that me, but we were in the same class at school. I guess that wasn’t difficult considering that there were only twenty students in the entire tiny schoolhouse. He had recently turned sixteen and the girls were forever fawning over him. Days at school crawled by whenever Ennis decided to turn up. I’d been forced to sit next to him on my very first day and he’d taken great delight in finding fault with me at every opportunity, saying my blue eyes were ‘girly’ and calling me ‘crow-head’ or ‘jackdaw’ on account of my black hair. I think he thought he was being funny. In reality he just pissed me off so I ignored him as best I could, although I frequently got the urge to break my slate over his head.

It was weird. Despite not liking Ennis, there was something about him that intrigued me. I kind of felt that if we had met in a different time, or a different place, then we could’ve been friends. I watched Ennis from under my lashes as he paddled us towards the shore, his gaze flickering to me every so often. Neither of us said a word.

With the riverbank only a few yards away, I jumped up and pushed my way past Ennis, planning to leap ashore and run back to my aunt’s house. The grass was hard and prickly under my bare feet, but I didn’t care. I just wanted to get away.

“You’re welcome,” Ennis said sarcastically as I offered him no word of thanks.

I gave him a half-hearted wave over my head, but didn’t look back.

“Hey! Wait a minute!” Ennis leapt out and pulled the raft to safety as I dashed away. He was taller than me, and wasn’t weighed down by soggy clothes, so he managed to catch me up pretty quickly. I got to the edge of the woods before he grabbed my arm and spun me around. “Jack, wait up.”

“What?” I wasn’t in the mood to bicker and needed to get home to explain about the sunken boat. Not that I was looking forward to that, either.

Ennis paused for a moment, the cool evening breeze ruffling the curly blond hair sticking out of the back of his hat. “Seriously, what were you doing out there?”

“Like you care.” I turned away again, but Ennis grabbed my arm once more.

“Jack, please.”

“Please? Please what?” I said impatiently. “I appreciate the rescue effort and everything, but I need to get back. And change.” I gestured down to my wet clothes.

“Yeah… I guess so.”

Something about the way he said that caught me off guard. He looked… nervous almost.

I shivered as the breeze penetrated my soggy shirt and I felt goose bumps crawl up my arms.

“You cold?” Ennis noticed the shiver and moved a little closer to me.

I stepped back, rubbing my hands over my arms. “What do you think?”

“Here.” Ennis untied the flannel shirt from around his waist and handed it to me.

I stared at it, not quite sure what I was seeing. “Seriously?”

“Sure, why not.”

I was too cold to argue so I stripped off my own sodden shirt, letting it slop to the ground as I pulled on Ennis’ dry one. “Thanks.” I eyed his bare chest, noticing the play of dappled sunlight over his skin and the small hard peaks of his nipples. “Won’t you get cold though?”

“Nah,” Ennis shook his head, “got a spare shirt back home.”

I realized that I didn’t actually know where he lived.

Ennis stepped closer again and I took a deep breath as he raised a hand. I don’t know what I thought he was going to do, but he simply helped me to button the shirt, seeing as my shaking hands were doing a pretty lousy job. With him so close into my personal space, I somehow wasn’t able to control my breathing. I wanted him to go away, fast, but I also wanted him to stay.

Ennis finished buttoning up the shirt and briskly rubbed his hands down my arms. “Better?”

“Yeah,” I replied hesitantly. I wasn’t quite sure what was happening here. Who was this version of Ennis in front of me? Why was he being so nice?

Ennis’ hands slowed to a stop on my arms, but he didn’t let go. We both stood there for a moment, not quite knowing what to say.

I made the mistake of looking into Ennis’ dark eyes. My heart sped up and I found I couldn’t look away.

Ennis’ eyes searched my face in confusion, “Jack?”

I have no idea what possessed me, but I leant leaned forward and gently brushed my lips against his. Barely a touch, but we both felt it, both inhaled sharply.

Ennis made a small sound in his throat, then he was pushing me back against a tree, hands twisting in my hair as he slammed his mouth back down on mine. He was like a man possessed. He plundered my mouth with his tongue and I could barely do more than grab onto his bare shoulders to keep myself upright. I’d kissed a girl called Becky at school once, but it had been nothing like this. A white-hot heat rushed through me as my tongue touched his. My hands knocked his damn straw hat off so I could thread my fingers through his hair, holding his mouth tight against mine. Ennis leaned his whole body weight against me, pushing me hard against the tree as something equally hard throbbed against my hip. I moaned in pleasure and tried to wriggle around so we were crotch to crotch, but Ennis had me pinned too tight.

We kissed and kissed, and damn if I’d ever felt so alive in my life. I felt Ennis stutter and then wrench himself away, panting hard, rubbing the back of his hand over his lips. I could barely breathe myself and was grateful for the tree behind me, since no doubt I would’ve fallen over without support, my knees felt that weak. I dug my nails into the bark behind me.

Ennis leaned forward as if to kiss me again, but I twisted away, not trusting myself to keep my body under control if he did.

We stared at each other in bewilderment, knowing that something profound had just happened. Ennis seemingly recovered first and stooped to retrieve his hat, jamming it back on his head. “I… er… yeah.”

“Sure,” I nodded. Sure about what I didn’t actually know.

Ennis nodded in return and started to walk backwards towards the raft, still watching me. “So… guess I’ll see you tomorrow, huh? At school?”

“Yeah. Guess so.”

Ennis pushed the raft free and jumped on, paddling swiftly out into the middle of the river. He turned around to give me once long, last glance.

Still leaning against my tree, I watched him go. Kept watching until he had paddled out of sight.

I grasped the collar of Ennis’ shirt and pulled it to my nose, inhaling deeply. It smelled of sun, sweat and straw and was totally gorgeous. I stood there sniffing it for a few moments before I realized what I was doing.

Silently I picked up my own discarded shirt and balled it in my fist, water dripping through my fingers.

I suddenly figured that perhaps my luck was changing after all. Maybe school wouldn’t be quite so bad from now on. Long days sitting next to Ennis now held somewhat of an appeal. I smiled. He could call me whatever he wanted as long as we got the opportunity to “fish” again soon. Our lives had turned a corner. I knew things would be different. I was actually looking forward to it.

THE END

Date: 2010-07-18 03:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tmn1966.livejournal.com
I really enjoyed this. Their first kiss, their awkwardness.

Very good! Thank you for sharing. :)
Edited Date: 2010-07-18 03:34 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-07-19 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks so much - glad you enjoyed it :)
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-18 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roby100.livejournal.com
Beautiful!
The first kiss, gentle and then deep... and the first fishing trip! Really great.
Thanks so much.
A big hug
Roby

Date: 2010-07-19 01:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks Roby! Big hugs to you too :)
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-18 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hampshirerose.livejournal.com
What a great story and so descriptive...that kiss made my knees go weak!!

I was totally besotted with Tom Sawyer,Huck Finn and Becky Thatcher when I was young and this took me right back there. I think I must reread these stories soon.

rose x

Date: 2010-07-19 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks so much Rose! I adored the TV series when I was little and wanted so much to be friends with Huck and Tom. I guess they were my childhood Jack and Ennis!
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-18 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] camillar.livejournal.com
This was very sweet! I really enjoyed it! Thanks so much for sharing it with us! :)

Date: 2010-07-19 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks Camilla! Glad you enjoyed it :)
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-18 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mrs-spamlad.livejournal.com
This was great!

Very descriptive of the time period and setting, and such a clever approach to the challenge!

Thanks for sharing :)
jill

Date: 2010-07-19 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks Jill! It was a complete accident how this came about, I never intended to be inspired by a TV theme - but there you go! Thanks for reading :)
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-18 10:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mira986.livejournal.com
Awwww... this was so sweet! :)

Date: 2010-07-19 01:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks Mira, glad you liked it!
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-19 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] red2blue.livejournal.com
absolutely wonderful and oh so Tom Sawyer/Huck Finn too!! ;o)

Date: 2010-07-19 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for reading - I'm glad you liked it!
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-19 10:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suzysue2.livejournal.com
I liked this a lot - it reminded me of Anne of Green Gables when she was pretending to the Lady of Shalot and the boat sank underneath her!

Hugs, Sue

Date: 2010-07-19 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks Sue. Yes! The Anne of Green Gables scene was a big influence in this - I loved that part! And Gilbert looked so dreamy when he picked he up on his boat :)
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-19 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com
Great idea, slashing Tom/Huck! That was absolutely sacrilicious! I used to love that show... now I know why! Thanks so much for writing!

XO
Donna

Date: 2010-07-19 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Heheh! Thanks Donna! You know, I used to watch Tom/Huck in complete innocence. It was only when I watched the TV intro recently with my Jack/Ennis hat on that I saw the possibilities. Hum. I think I have been corrupted...
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-19 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawgoddess.livejournal.com
This was charming. I liked the little canon references, the shirt and the fishing. Also someone being pushed up against a tree is always appreciated, LOL.

The song was very cute, and it was a clever concept. Thanks for participating in the challenge.

Date: 2010-07-19 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks LG! I was actually worried that this wouldn't 'qualify' for this challenge, as a TV intro isn't really a song is it? But I figured that I'd post it anyway and see if anyone noticed!!!
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-19 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noreins.livejournal.com
Mmmm - I can just see Ennis as Huck Finn. And yeah, I was besotted by them too as a kid. Obviously I didn't see anything more than friendship back then...but now that I think about it...lol.

Very nice indeed - thanks for sharing!

Date: 2010-07-19 04:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading! I had a big crush on Tom back then... Yeah, I never saw anything in the Huck/Tom relationship either - not until after I had seen BBM anyway!!!
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-19 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trekfan.livejournal.com
this was beautiful. I am glad you decided to write something for this challenge. I miss your wonderful story telling Anna

Hugs
Linda

Date: 2010-07-19 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks Linda. I miss posting here too! Glad you liked it :)
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-19 08:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heathyluv.livejournal.com
Anna-Banana! You definitely get a prize for posting the first entry, and even a bigger prize for writing this killa first kiss! I loved it, girl!!! Woo-hoo!
XOXO
Hluv


Date: 2010-07-19 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
LOL! "Anna Banana" - that's got to be my new name!! Thanks so much :) I do lurrrrrve first kisses - which probably explains why I write lots of them!!
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-19 09:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tui77.livejournal.com
Oh this was so charming and fun!

I like a teenage Ennis and Jack.

Cheers

Tui

Date: 2010-07-19 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks so much Tui - really glad you liked it!
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-20 12:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thordottir.livejournal.com
I hope there's more of this one, its great!
thanks

Date: 2010-07-20 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! I wish I could say that there would be more of this, but I haven't planned any. Although never say never!
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-20 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] george66.livejournal.com
Anna,

this was simply wonderful. i can so easily see ennis as the huck finn type (wearing his straw hat and floating down the river on his raft) with jack as his tow sawyer. their first kiss was so sweet!!

thanks for writing.

george

Date: 2010-07-21 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks George! Glad to know you are out there and still reading my little offerings! Yes, picturing the boys as Huck and Tom wasn't very difficult at all :)
Anna x

FfLT

Date: 2010-07-21 09:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silver7red.livejournal.com
Wow! I loved this!
It's so sweet...I wonder whether Jack is going to keep Ennis's shirt after this or not!

I've never watched that T.V.series but I knew the story well.
This story also reminded me of one of my favorite book called 'Dance on My Grave' because the way romance started;
http://www.pinkbooks.com/Dance-On-My-Grave-Chambers.html

Have you read the book before? It's not written by a gay writer at all but the gay teenage romance theme was positively written for Young Adults.
If you can handle the major character's accidental death subject in the story (e.g. 'A Single Man' by C.Isherwood), I strongly recommend this for you and for a bit nostalgic Brithish 80s era...

BTW, I hope that we can also read two other stories you have started for the challenge in someway in the future!

H&K
Silver
x

Re: FfLT

Date: 2010-07-21 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks so much! Yes, I reckon Jack might keep Ennis' shirt for a little while - maybe 'forget' to return it :)

I haven't read the book you mention, but anything with 80s nostalgia has got to be good!!

I don't know if the other two fics will get finished, but I'm hoping that a multi-part fic I started ages ago might get finished soon. Once that does then I'll be posting that one :)
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-23 12:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carmenmariabs.livejournal.com
Beautiful, really beautiful.
I think Jack is over the bad luck ...
Only Ennis, .. just Jack. Your day to day.
Thank you.
Carmen
Very nice.
PS: It's a shame that this does not continue ...

Date: 2010-07-23 12:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks so much Carmen! If I do get the muse back for this story then I'll definitely do a bit more, but it's wondered over to another WIP of mine, so I hope to post something else in the near future :)
Anna x

Date: 2010-07-23 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jacks-key.livejournal.com
Sweet story! :D

Date: 2010-07-24 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for reading!
Anna x

Date: 2010-09-29 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sandscrit.livejournal.com
I don't think I ever saw the show... but I know like your casting better :-)

Very cute story! Thanks for posting.

Date: 2010-09-30 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annabirmingham.livejournal.com
Thanks so much for reading and commenting - I really appreciate it :)
Anna x

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